Ken McCullough’s The Easy Wreckage forfeits Tate’s (James Tate, Hints to Pilgrims) hopeful hopelessness, perhaps because McCullough seems not to compose so many poems so easily. His twenty-one mature poems fashionably engage tenuous formalities: he’s not unconcerned about the individual word on page and line, His longer poems offer, again, epistles: “A Winter Espousal,” “Blues Project,” and “Falling into Place” all address Nancy, Lally, and Kathy with syllogistic incompletion. This isn’t to say McCullough’s personal intimacy, however imagined, clarifies what Tate’s can’t, but it does nicely space whole words no more fashionably than other poetries. McCullough well avoids fashion, usually. There’s a patch in “Georgian Reception, for Robert Bly” showing what McCullough chances in his longer sentences:
You must suffer!
Lace compassion
On the sidewalk worms
here let me autograph your jock
you must spit on Franciscans
I’m afraid he’s imperatively inventing here, whereas he’s not in “Matins::Iowa River”:
sucking through the marsh
past the muskrat hutch
I must move
like some fluteboned ungulate
under cool rafters of the Rinzai forest
Although this discovery, like one of Tim Reynolds’, may be that of an opening sentence, there are discoveries at his sentence’s period”—bursting gethsemanes/ trees of white flowers/ trees of coral flowers/ I fly up into them.” Maybe that’s conventional closure, yet it’s discovery not invention. The tedia of “Georgian Reception” serendipitously imitate Tate’s. It’s the point to praise, however, so I’ll praise “Anti-Elegy for Father and Son”:
A figure is walking ahead of me. I approach
but find no footprints in the snow.
It is 1920, my forehead opens like a
window to the night. Father, I am you.
McCullough’s elegy isn’t so “anti”: the tenuous of line, swing, and convention do form it, so easing acceptance of “butter beautiful with maggots/ in the easy wreckage of my youth…” Simply, it’s easier to sense McCullough’s two formalities—spaced, in “Sabbatical Syllabus,” and tight, in “Amish Summer”—than Tate’s, which are individual, but expansive. “The Installment Plan” picks up Alan Dugan’s language, his line, and almost his misanthropy too:
Bill, pigeontoed in your dubious teeshirt
What do you do when loving her is like
Keeping the sleeping pill o.d. walking.
McCullough’s most accessible verse performance occurs in “My Brother’s Garden” where his dip of High Church tone swings around each line’s caesura: “Where he walks there is no shadow, for the shadow is wed to bone.” The Sentence of such statement works this, and it reverses finally: “Sweet saviors, in time, you will snip off the lips of this criminal.” McCullough’s authority is formal: Tate’s seems idiosyncratic, but both The Easy Wreckage and Hints to Pilgrims are benchmarks in the realest rock. Theuir positions—sometimes the brasses are tarnished by weather—are triangulated between the earnest tergiversations of “Cal” & Co, and the fantasies of Poetry’s recently “flatted” voices. May each surveyor not misplace them. Pray.